Author: Teddy

The western wave was all a flame.

The day was well nigh done!

Almost upon the western wave

Rested the broad bright sun;

When that strange shape drove suddenly

Betwixt us and sun

The poem uses reppition for example western western,wave wave and sun sun.

The poem also uses aliteration western wave it makes feel drowzy and a little bit lazy calm and it also makes you feel chilled out.

1. The first important thing that happened in part the seventh was when the ship started to slow down and the Mariner could here these two voices.
2. The first voice said “But tell me, tell me! Speak again, thy soft response renewing-what makes that ship drive on so fast? What is the ocean doing?”
3. The second voice said ” Still as a slave before his Lord, the ocean hath no blast his great bright eye most silently up to the moon is cast.”
4. The pilot saw a ship moving towards our ship do the pilot had to keep going straight soon the ships reached each other and there was a rumble underneath the boat.
5. Then soon after the ship started to sink the spare paddle boats where thrown off the ship and people began to jump into the boats and paddled away.

1. In the start of the part the sixth the curse had left the the Mariner and the Albatross had been unleashed from the Mariners shoulders.
2. Soon after the ship shot of like a bullet and the Mariner and all the guests and the crew fell to the ground and the people on the ship where all badly injured.
3. After this the boat became at a good level of speed the Mariner was unctuous and he could hear two voices.
4. The first voice said”tell me, tell me! speak again, thy soft response renewing- what makes that ship drive on so fast? what is the ocean doing?”                                           5. The second said ” your curse has been unleashed and has been forgotten.”

er the Mariner blessed the water snakes the albatross was unleashed from his shouldersd the curse had ended.

2. All the guests and all the crew where looking under the boat and there was a strange creature underneath the ship rocking the ship side to side back and forth.

3. Because the albatross and the curse Ended there was all of a sudden of wind and a storm of rain.

4. As the wind started to pick up the soon shot of into the distance blood dripping down the Mariner like dropping water.

5. Soon after the boat slowed down everyone fell to the ground and the Mariner was unconscious and he could hear two voices in the air saying ‘is it he quoth he.’

metaphor: And the coming wind did roar more loud

i chose this metaphor because it’s talking about one thing then it adds something different but it’s actually talking about the same thing.

My ten lines: The loud wind never reached the ship, yet now the ship moved on! Beneath the lighting and the moon the dead men gave a groan.

1.All of the Mariners crew members shot a stare at the Mariner and all of their eyes glowed for one second and cursed the Mariner shortly after that the crew members dropped to the floor one by one.

2. All guests were scared of the Mariner because they believed the Mariner killed all of the crew members.

3. The Mariner was trying to pray but he couldn’t because of the curse that the crew members put on him.

4. Under the ship changed colour because of fish. The passengers were saying the fish were ugly and how disgusting they are, but the Mariner saw differently. He saw them as harmless creatures so he blessed them and worshiped them.

5. After the albatross fell from his shoulders and slowly fell into the water, the curse had ended for the Mariner. The wind picked up around the boat and rain fell giving them water to drink. He was also able to pray for his crew mates and they came back to life.

My metaphor: The wind picked up around the boat. This represents the curse being lifted and along with it the spirits and hope.